My Narrative

LI:To use language features to paint a picture in the mind of the reader and write in paragraphs.

The full moon shone brightly in the night summer sky, stars twinkled like a million fairy lights and a young man named Harry and his two best friends, Hermione and Percy’s train came to a screech and pulled itself into the station.  This was how they used to travel when they were younger.

   Harry, Hermione and Percy were wearing their  robes and cloaks. Hermione’s brown, curly hair magically tidy, made her look as pretty as a picture. Harry was wearing round glasses and his messy hair covering his lightning scar on his forehead.  Percy’s red hair was also magically tidy (with Brotts and sons tidy hair potion by Mr.Brotts and his sons).

Then they walked to the great hall and then they knocked once and then Albus Dumbledore opened the door and said: “Hello Harry,Hermione and Percy.  How was your journey? Come in come in.”  The headmaster was wearing long gold and silver robes with matching gold and silver stars, and his long,several feet of wispy silver hair was carefully, magically tied with the 4 hogwarts colors:Hufflepuff,Ravenclaw,
Gryffindor and Slytherin.

“Hello Professor Dumbledore” they said as they eyes glanced over him. He sounded like a large, tall man with a voice as loud as a karaoke machine turned up. But as then another surprise greeted them.  They were professors Lupin, Snape, Mcgonagall, Mad Eye Moody and Hagrid.   “Hello Professors” they said.  “What are you doing he..” said professor Snape in his most poisonous voice.  “They’re here to help Severus, they’re not students anymore, Come, lets all go to the the Great Hall, there’s a delicious feast there in your honour for coming, we’ll discuss the plan over dinner” announced Dumbledore.

On the way there however,Nearly Headless Nick,the Gryffindor ghost came towards the group with a message from Professor Flitwick.

The message was:Professors’ you need to come to the Great Hall,You-Know- who is here and I won’t be able to fight him myself,I am a charms teacher: so come with your wands and a few spells so we will be able to defeat him.

Thanks.

So then they ran all the way there,wands in their hands ready to kill Voldemort  and then they barged into the Great Hall and raised their wands and shouted the same spell behind Lord Voldemort's back:he turned,but too late: Avada Kedavra and he went up in the air and for a moment he screamed and then he fell to the ground but he was already dead before he landed with a Thump! on the ground.

And Once he fell to the ground dead,everyone he killed came back to life including Harry Potter’s Mum and Dad,Lily and James potter was once reunited with their son Harry Potter:The Boy Who Survived.

The End.